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Post by Pest Control on Nov 23, 2006 23:01:59 GMT
who so happened to be very
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Post by Duke Dudeston on Nov 23, 2006 23:04:56 GMT
excited about his new mushroom
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Post by Pest Control on Nov 24, 2006 11:13:16 GMT
He felt passionate about the mushroom
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Post by Lieutenant Fatman on Nov 24, 2006 12:21:11 GMT
Small Albert and Crazy Fred
Deep down under the ground in Texas, a man lived next to a rather large chocolate pudding. Fred came across this man during a baseball match against a frog; he was a rather odd frog who lived inside the chocolate pudding. The frog loved chocolate, hence the strange and wondrous colour of his rather large multi coloured coat. Fred also loved the smell of simmering poo boiling in a rather large boat shaped potato peeler.
One day the pudding decided to explode, so the frog and the man - Albert, (who so happened to be very excited about his new mushroom and felt passionate about the mushroom), both decided to ask Fred if
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Post by Duke Dudeston on Nov 24, 2006 13:07:45 GMT
he would like a new haircut
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Tabicat
Doughnut Dude
MEOW
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Post by Tabicat on Nov 24, 2006 23:55:37 GMT
to show off to the queen
(this is pretty cool, but if this story does better then the other, what will happen to it?)
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Post by Lieutenant Fatman on Nov 25, 2006 12:03:24 GMT
of Fairyland, who advertised tomato puddings
(I don't see a problem with having both threads going, as long as people want to post in them.)
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Post by Duke Dudeston on Nov 25, 2006 12:14:07 GMT
too three hundred and four people.
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Post by Lieutenant Fatman on Nov 26, 2006 12:22:02 GMT
Fred traded Albert's mushroom for three
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Fiendish Losna
Doughnut Dude
nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands
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Post by Fiendish Losna on Nov 26, 2006 12:31:49 GMT
red and turquoise spotted shetland ponies
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Post by Lieutenant Fatman on Nov 26, 2006 12:40:50 GMT
and two tomato puddings; when Albert
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Post by Duke Dudeston on Nov 26, 2006 12:53:50 GMT
found a beer powered leaf blower
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Fiendish Losna
Doughnut Dude
nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands
Posts: 240
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Post by Fiendish Losna on Nov 26, 2006 13:03:23 GMT
[off topic] and two tomato puddings; when Albert Can you use the semicolon in this instance? I had a lengthy debate with a friend about this the other day - I think you can only use when its connected to an independent clause. www.arts.uottawa.ca/writcent/hypergrammar/semicoln.htmlI remember everyone battling to use it as many times as possible in their essays at uni, because lets face it; the semi colon looks pretty damn cool... Because of this, it fueled a huge debate and our lecturers started handing out letters to tell us all off! [/off topic/]
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Post by Casselle on Nov 26, 2006 21:10:58 GMT
[off topic]
I have just ran the entire story, up until now through Word 2003 and that didn't find any Grammar mistakes. so I suppose that was right, and as I have ran it all through word, I suppose I can save Lt Fatman the time to post the story:
[/off topic]
Deep down under the ground in Texas, a man lived next to a rather large chocolate pudding. Fred came across this man during a baseball match against a frog; he was a rather odd frog who lived inside the chocolate pudding. The frog loved chocolate, hence the strange and wondrous colour of his rather large multi coloured coat. Fred also loved the smell of simmering poo boiling in a rather large boat shaped potato peeler.
One day the pudding decided to explode, so the frog and the man - Albert, (who so happened to be very excited about his new mushroom and felt passionate about the mushroom), both decided to ask Fred if he would like a new haircut to show off to the queen of Fairyland, who advertised tomato puddings too three hundred and four people.
Fred traded Albert's mushroom for three red and turquoise spotted shetland ponies and two tomato puddings; when Albert found a beer powered leaf blower that turned out to be a
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Fiendish Losna
Doughnut Dude
nobody,not even the rain,has such small hands
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Post by Fiendish Losna on Nov 27, 2006 10:17:25 GMT
(Sorry for a pedantic ****!)
chocolate cheesecake laced with French Brandy.
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